Mortal Kombat vs Street Fighter 2

Discussion in 'General' started by Myke, Nov 14, 2005.

  1. MartialHonour

    MartialHonour Well-Known Member

    This is the story,give me suggestions after you read it:


    Eddy Gordo, the son of a wealthy industrialist,was betrayed by an organization who murdered his father and place Eddy behind bars.When a Prison riot broke out,Eddy flee to search for answers.He joined The King of Iron Fist Tournament (Tekken Tournament),but it didn't lead him to the colprits behind his father's death.He was going nowhere until Nina Williams decided to help him. Since his father's death was an assassination, Nina thought she could give Eddy an idea of what kind of assassin that the murderer was and where he or she could probably be found.Williams informed him that the assassin could be hiding in a different dimension and she showed Gordo how to get there. A place in the woods where a dark mirror was kept, Nina explained to Gordo it was used for transportation inbetween dimensions.She gave him a kiss, slip a piece of paper in his pocket and told him to not trust anyone.Eddy looked at the mirror and notice the black smog that formed at its edges.When he focused on it, he saw a figure in it ,but it wasn't recognisable.He jumped into the mirror and felt prostrate on cold ground.Eddy got up and dusted himself off. He lookedaround and did not recognise where he was at.He took the piece of paper out of his pocket that Nina had placed in before and read the name witten in cursive.As Eddy balled up the piece of paper
    and threw it on the ground,he started on his quest to look for his target,Goh.
     
  2. Genzen

    Genzen Well-Known Member

    What about Geese Howard? You forgot to put him in.....
     
  3. LM_Akira

    LM_Akira Well-Known Member

    LOL /versus/images/graemlins/lol.gif this is too much.

    If you're serious about this I think you should invest in much more character development...make it believable. **

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    Eddy Gordo, the son of a wealthy industrialist,was betrayed by an organization who murdered his father and place Eddy behind bars.

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    How and why was Eddy's father killed and why was he "placed" behind bars. I need more depth.

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    He joined The King of Iron Fist Tournament (Tekken Tournament),but it didn't lead him to the colprits behind his father's death.

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    But the thing is, King of Ironfist tournaments ALWAYS lead the characters to the answers they're looking for...and if they don't they just enter the next one...it's a non stop cycle of answers from fighting in the tournament.

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    He was going nowhere until Nina Williams decided to help him.

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    Why did she decide to help him? I need to believe should would want to help him, not just be told she did.

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    Since his father's death was an assassination, Nina thought she could give Eddy an idea of what kind of assassin that the murderer was and where he or she could probably be found.Williams informed him that the assassin could be hiding in a different dimension and she showed Gordo how to get there.

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    GAH?!?

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    A place in the woods where a dark mirror was kept, Nina explained to Gordo it was used for transportation inbetween dimensions.

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    Dimensions or transport between parallel universes? You mean if eddy travels through this thing he'll go from a 4-dimensional world to a world made of a different amount of dimensions?

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    He jumped into the mirror and felt prostrate on cold ground.

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    Come on, you're breaking fundamental laws of physics here! (!)

    And yeah, you missed out Geese Howard!! (unforgivable)

    ** Disclaimer: These points may be made in jest.
     
  4. MartialHonour

    MartialHonour Well-Known Member

    1.I did not create Eddy Gordo. He was an actual chracter of Tekken 3 and I got his bio from the manual. Thats all I could work with.

    2.The Tekkn Tournament doesn't always lead the fighters to answers. In Tekken 3, Eddy Gordo didn't get any answers, he was attacked by men in black suits.

    3.Nina Williams helped him because later on in the story, she betrays him. Goh and Nina end up trapping Eddy in the parallel universe. Thats why she says: "Don't trust no one."

    4.The Dark Mirror is an symbol of Vengeance. Have you ever heard: "Vengeance is a dark mirror in which you cannot see yourself in?"

    And I'm not putting Geese Howard in that Fucking Story!
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  5. LM_Akira

    LM_Akira Well-Known Member

    1. Yeah I know don't worry...I've played Tekken for more than 8 years. /versus/images/graemlins/lol.gif

    2. I think you missed the joke.

    3. LMAO she helps him cos she'll betray him? Is it pre meditated? What's in it for her? Circular.

    If you're not going to put Geese in the "Fucking Story" why post a pic of him?

    What about Mai? Or Kim? Or Choi? Or Andy? That would kick ass!
     
  6. MartialHonour

    MartialHonour Well-Known Member

    Nina Williams is an assassin, just like Goh Hinogami. So inorder for them to do their jobs, they both try and kill him.

    P.S there was a joke?
     
  7. LM_Akira

    LM_Akira Well-Known Member

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    WongGoonHung said:

    P.S there was a joke?

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    Ut-oh.

    Nevermind...
     
  8. Darrius_Cole

    Darrius_Cole Well-Known Member

    PSN:
    Darrius-Cole
    XBL:
    Darrius Cole HD
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    LM_Akira said:

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    WongGoonHung said:

    P.S there was a joke?

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    Ut-oh.

    Nevermind...

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    I don't think he quite gets VFDC's quite male, very confrontational, often sarcastic, commonly vulgar, and definitely profane, sense of humor yet. He just needs a while to develop the thick skin necessary to dwell here.

    That's why I love this site. If you think something you say it. He'll figure it out in time.....

    .....unless he's a fucking idiot.
     
  9. Sudden_Death

    Sudden_Death Well-Known Member

    yo, u were not supposed to post the story, even if it was bad or good. just surprise us with the flash movie. now its ruined since we know what happens, sorta. and this thread has been alive for too long /versus/images/graemlins/tongue.gif
     

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