Virtua Fighter Rappers and Poets Speak out

all my haters seem to flock to me,
seem to always wanna talk of me,
bend their necks to take stock of me,
spend their time stalkin me,
but i hope ya keep squwakin free,
cause ya'll don't mean fuck to me!

gonna make me get cruel,
adding fire to the fuel,
hear the bells toll,
as i make ya heads roll.

 

Sure thing bob

 

that sucked ass

 

Fuck, it's not like anyone is gonna get fucking pissed if you fucking say "fawk" on this site.

 

lol, never know and dont want to be modded off my fav website. but...point taken, done and edited

 

Using "me" as the last word in five lines out of six is not good poetry.

 

I'm playing Goh, but I ain't have no online experience,
Was about to shut down the console, heard someone parkin' a Benz,
It was Plague from California, but hey, I don't even know him,
Does he even drive Mercedes? (Insert Plague's answer) I hope you pronounce it - so it will give a rhyme to Mercedes - "Hades"

Better stand back to wall and hit guard, Close your eyes,
Wait a moment, Plague's KNEE hits so damn hard,
Major Counter flashes everywhere, I'm flying through the stage,
Akira's long wild hair, waves and I feel increased rage

The match is over, what a drama!
Plague leaves, please take a look at this rhymes grammar.


This is dedicated.

 

Its a stylistic technique, the rhyme doesn't dwell on the last word, altho yes, there is alliteration, the rhyme lives in the second to the last word, thats what gives it its flow. Go listen to any rap song, they do it all the time--the technique has only made Marshal Mathers a billionaire, lol, really! So your criticism is legit in most cases, but you're a little off the mark here. Social Ruin has some published poetry and has won a few awards for it, soooooooooooooooooo.

And to KtotheG=fail.
Ummm, 3 pages on this thread and you are the first person to come on here and be negative about someones work. Thats weak. Put your petty differences aside and grow up, his rhyme was as good as anything else on here but you are just hating b/c you don't like him. It takes courage to come and post something personal that you created, it takes cowardice to come and criticize it with no better purpose than being a jerk.

 

Reply KG we need entertainment, something with bite and exploitable holes that SMB can really sink his teeth into. Nothing well thought out though, and if possible misspell a few things.

Remember a true flame war needs content.

 

Lol@worstplayer. It wouldn't be the internet if people put content into thier posts, and definitely no thought aloud (yes, that was mispelled intentionally--allowed). But if someone could throw in what they'd do if they were here in person, that would be great.

 

Wasn't this rhyme titled "<u>haters</u>"?

So he's hating. /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/smirk.gif

It shouldn't mean anything to the OP, am I right? /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/wink.gif

 

eh? they merged a thread that social_ruin created with this one. i posted before the merge /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/smile.gif

and besides, do you not find that creating your own thread titled "haters" with a whack rhyme going like
"all my haters seem to flock to me,
seem to always wanna talk of me,
bend their necks to take stock of me,
spend their time stalkin me,
but i hope ya keep squwakin free,
cause ya'll don't mean fuck to me!

gonna make me get cruel,
adding fire to the fuel,
hear the bells toll,
as i make ya heads roll. "

is the slightest bit obnoxious?

and anyway, thanks for the compliments man! much appreciated /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/laugh.gif


OH and btw; much as i would gladly accept the honor of the first negative post, KoD is the rightful recipient of that sadly /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/frown.gif

(now that son of a bitch has something else over me /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/wink.gif /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/frown.gif . damn KoD hehe)

 

When I visit Austria, I will drive a CLK63 AMG Black Series just so that rap will come true.

I never thought me and my KNEEs would be immortalized in a VFDC rap. Very cool, indeed.

 

I like boobs
I hate noobs
I bruised your girl's
fallopian tubes

Your lag makes me sick
I broke my Hori stick
I stole your Master rank
with my tap-throw trick

 

7-5, that's genius.

 

^ Wins /thread

 

winnar

 

all teh win are belong to j00

 

"eh? they merged a thread that social_ruin created with this one. i posted before the merge /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/smile.gif

and besides, do you not find that creating your own thread titled "haters" with a whack rhyme .......
is the slightest bit obnoxious?

and anyway, thanks for the compliments man! much appreciated /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/laugh.gif


OH and btw; much as i would gladly accept the honor of the first negative post, KoD is the rightful recipient of that sadly /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/frown.gif

(now that son of a bitch has something else over me /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/wink.gif /forums/images/%%GRAEMLIN_URL%%/frown.gif . damn KoD hehe)"
#1, the rhyme scheme is still not really that bad, but no reason to reiterate that point, i summed it up nicely in the first post.

#2, if you did so before the merge then, touche, my bad, nothing bogus about that. Still don't agree with your opinion but don't begrudge you having one.

peace out.

 

I'll spit this rhyme when
I rip your girls hymen
grab sticks y'all grab dicks
ya'll be virtual-fightin'
Come see the rhyme titan
No room up top
no quarters given
Squash contenders like a taka belly flop
A sick side kick will split ya afro wig
different types of configs
but still competition easy to rip
100 round killing spree
I see you tremble in your boots, not ready to see me
Dean still lets rip incredible lyric
straight from my lips out esophagus
I come to battle cats with frames and stats
bring all of that,
still you can't quick rise my rhyme attack.